One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. · What do you think the causes are? · What solutions can be done

In most metropolitan
cities
,
traffic
jam is
biggest
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concern nowadays.
This
issue
consuming
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lot
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of time
of
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everyone. In
this
essay causes and possible
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solutions
soluations
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solutions
discussed
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below. In
this
modern era, populations are growing faster than
expert
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prediction
predictions
perdiction
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prediction
.
For instance
, more
peoples
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people
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are using their personal
vehicles
rather than before. As grown
of
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population, roads can not
expanded
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compare to demand. Whereas in every large
cities
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city
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almost every products and service are available.
Therefore
, people moved
cities
from urban
cities
.
Therefore
,
demand
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the demand
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of
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public
transports
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and personal
vehicles
are
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increasing
day
by
day
, and for
this
traffic
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,traffic
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congestions
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congestion
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is increasing
day
by
day
.
Besides
that, cars, motorbikes, and other personal
vehicles
are very cheaper rather than before, for
this
opportunity people
purchasing
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for necessarily and unnecessarily and that
also
causes
traffic
jam
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.
This
problem can be prevented through some
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strick
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rules
that should be implemented by the government. Government should be more stricks about
traffic
rules
and should increase fines who violate the
rules
.
On the other hand
, the government should have to increase personal
vehicles
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taxes and road taxes that demotivated to buy new cars or motorbikes. To sum up, everyone suffers from
traffic
problems in major
cities
,
cities
people must have to determine about solve
this
problem.
otherwise
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any
rules
, restrictions and fines can not solve
this
problem.
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  • traffic congestion
  • urban population
  • public transportation
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure
  • economic strength
  • consumerism
  • car ownership
  • commuting
  • peak hours
  • public transit
  • carpooling
  • ride-sharing
  • remote work
  • flexible working hours
  • cycling infrastructure
  • congestion charges
  • traffic management systems
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