You would like to take some time off of work to attend a training course. Write a letter to your supervisor asking for permission to attend the course. In your letter • describe the training course • say how it will help improve your job performance • explain how much time you need off and ask for permission Begin your letter as follows: Dear………..

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Dear Mr Bennet, My name is Ugha

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and I am a pediatric dentist in our clinic. I am writing

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letter to tell you that I need to take some days off because I want to visit a new course by

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Riccucci. That course will be held for 2 days and it consists of 1 theory day and 1 practice day. We are going to consider an enormous amount of topics

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as dental traumas, fluorosis and new ways of caries treatment.

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we are going to prepare teeth for crowns and

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we will practice how to deal with a new type of anaesthesia. That course is very important for me because it is a great opportunity to

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my medical knowledge and develop my manual skills. For that reason, I would really appreciate it if you consider my application and give me

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permission to have 2 days off from Monday till Wednesday

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week. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Ugha

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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