Parents, usually mothers, stay at home to look after their families. People believe that for this they should receive a salary from the government. Do you agree or disagree and why?

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day and age, the number of full-time housekeeping

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is constantly growing. Some believe

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should pay them salaries. In my opinion,

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, I disagree with

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idea due to the potential social implications and the increase in financial burden on authorities.

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essay will analyze these factors, using examples from the UK government and Stanford University to prove my arguments. On the one hand, full-time housekeeping

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seem to need financial support from

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. The reason behind

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is twofold.

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, they look after their

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at the cost of being unemployed and giving up income resources.

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, the expenditure on raising children is rather high, especially during the period when children were very young and cannot take care of themselves.

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, some of these

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might confront financial difficulties without support from the state. That being said, it is unreasonable for authorities to pay housing

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wages. The primary reason is

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measure would be unfair to the dual income

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and in turn, have a negative effect on society.

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because some working

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might feel upset and quit their jobs

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if they could not get subsidies from

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merely because they have a job. In fact, recent research from the UK government shows that the unemployed rate in countries which can offer relatively greater amounts of maternity subsidy is clearly higher than that in other countries.

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, it is possible that people might prefer to be unemployed if

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provided them with salaries for full-time keeping housing and

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will lead to a brain drain in society. Another reason is that

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governmental support would pose a heavy financial burden on

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, leading to budget cuts for other social systems. A study from Stanford University shows that in the US there are around half a million new full-time housekeeping

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increasing each year.

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would cost authorities a fortune once they decided to pay these

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salaries.

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, the budget for other social aspects

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as medical, educational and transport systems will inevitably be cut down. To conclude,

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full-time housing

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may need temporary financial help to overcome their difficulties in raising

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, claiming that they should receive a salary from the government may not be a wise option, as it will cause so many multiple negative social implications. I personally think that being unemployed to better look after

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is merely a personal choice.

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people should be responsible for their own and, while responsibility should not fall on

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