Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
For lots of
people
, when they get their first job
they think about whether they will remain in the same organization
. If they want to change, they will think about the impact on their future career overall
.
To begin
, people
who work
in the same organization
for many years have the advantage of fully understanding their job
. By this
I mean, the quality of their work
will increase and they become professionals in their field. Indeed, this
factor is acceptable for their companies. Employers value loyalty and their confidence in long-term employees
, including huge salary bonuses and rewards. However
, why do people
work
for different organizations
?
However
, working for the same organizations
and doing the same things year after year has some disadvantages for employees
. The reason for that is
employees
will work
without any enthusiasm in their field and this
can lead to boredom. Moving from one organization
to another can increase the range of skills and experience. Workers will work
with a lot of enthusiasm and without boredom. For instance
, my mom’s brother started his career in the military. After 15 years in this
field, he found a new job
connected with buildings. This
has made him incredibly knowledgeable in a range of fields, and he had a much more interesting working life. In my opinion, working for different organizations
can do
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make
employees
working life incredibly interesting.
To sum up
, there are some pros of working for one organization
. However
, I think that, if people
work
for different organizations
, they will work
with tonnes of enthusiasm in their new job
. Moreover
, people
should choose their working life by themselves.Submitted by nurss0567 on
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