In education and employment, some people work harder than others. Why do some people work harder? Is it always a good thing to work hard?

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society

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working harder either in

workplace

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the workplace

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or in

educational

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the educational

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sectors, because of money and career.

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, because of

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they can face problems physically and mentally. There are numerous causes

that

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individuals are working

for

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harder and

give

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extra effort.

Firstly

, people

are spend

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extra

time

because of money because they want to make their future comfortable or provide good education to their children,

therefore

, they are doing overtime at work.

Secondly

, teachers

are encourage

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the student

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student

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students

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to spend more and more

time

with their books because if they spend much

time

then

they will get

good

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grade

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grades

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.

Besides

, they can choose their major in

big

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sector

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sectors

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such

as

,

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science,

doctor

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, and even

in

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space. Namely, a study

of

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on

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CNC asked

scientist

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scientists

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and doctors in China about their success, answers were they used to study

16

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to 17 hours. If people are providing extra effort

in

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anywhere, they would face many problems.

For example

, those who are working in construction or in

industry

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the industry

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sector

they

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often break their hand or leg. Because after walking 8 to 9 hours their body may

can

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not handle that pressure sometimes and they make

mistake

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,

consequently

, it turns into an accident even sometimes it becomes the cause of death. Mental stress is common among learners who

are spend

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more

time

with books because everybody wants to make

future

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brighter.

In addition

, their mind cannot handle that pressure and in

end

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result, they cannot perform

good

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in

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the examination

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examination

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examinations

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even

they

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may lose

the

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control of

the

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mind. For

instant

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, 56%

Bangladeshi

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of Bangladeshi

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HSC candidates

were

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failed because they were studying 14 to 15 hours. In conclusion, individuals

working

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work

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extra for making future

amenity

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amenities

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and pupils

studying

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study

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hard for better occupations, whereas, by doing that it can be reasons

of

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health and inward problems.