In education and employment, some people work harder than others. Why do some people work harder? Is it always a good thing to work hard?
Some members of
the
society Correct article usage
apply
is
working harder either in Change the verb form
are
workplace
or in Add an article
the workplace
educational
sectors, because of money and career. Correct article usage
the educational
However
, because of this
they can face problems physically and mentally.
There are numerous causes Add a comma
,this
that
individuals are working Correct word choice
why
for
harder and Change preposition
apply
give
extra effort. Wrong verb form
giving
Firstly
, people are spend
extra Change the verb form
are spending
time
because of money because they want to make their future comfortable or provide good education to their children, therefore
, they are doing overtime at work. Secondly
, teachers are encourage
Change the verb form
encourage
Add an article
the student
a student
student
to spend more and more Fix the agreement mistake
students
time
with their books because if they spend much time
then
they will get good
Add an article
a good
grade
. Fix the agreement mistake
grades
Besides
, they can choose their major in big
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the big
a big
sector
Fix the agreement mistake
sectors
such
as,
science, Remove the comma
apply
doctor
, and even Replace the word
doctorate
in
space. Namely, a study Change preposition
apply
of
CNC asked Change preposition
on
scientist
and doctors in China about their success, answers were they used to study Fix the agreement mistake
scientists
16
to 17 hours.
If people are providing extra effort Change preposition
for 16
in
anywhere, they would face many problems. Change preposition
apply
For example
, those who are working in construction or in industry
sector Correct article usage
the industry
they
often break their hand or leg. Because after walking 8 to 9 hours their body may Correct pronoun usage
apply
can
not handle that pressure sometimes and they make Remove a modal verb
apply
mistake
, Fix the agreement mistake
mistakes
consequently
, it turns into an accident even sometimes it becomes the cause of death. Mental stress is common among learners who are spend
more Change the verb form
spend
time
with books because everybody wants to make future
brighter. Correct article usage
the future
In addition
, their mind cannot handle that pressure and in end
result, they cannot perform Add an article
the end
good
in Change the adjective
well
Add an article
the examination
examination
even Fix the agreement mistake
examinations
they
may lose Correct word choice
though they
the
control of Correct article usage
apply
the
mind. For Change the word
their
instant
, 56% Add an article
an instant
Bangladeshi
HSC candidates Change preposition
of Bangladeshi
were
failed because they were studying 14 to 15 hours.
In conclusion, individuals Unnecessary verb
apply
working
extra for making future Wrong verb form
work
amenity
and pupils Fix the agreement mistake
amenities
studying
hard for better occupations, whereas, by doing that it can be reasons Wrong verb form
study
of
health and inward problems.Change preposition
for
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