write a letter to local authorities by requesting additional sports facilities for your age group in your area. mention about the current sport facilities available what kind of additional sports facilities should be introduced how the new sports facilities would be a help for the people in your age group.

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Dear sir, My name is Rashmi Jani, reside in Ghatlodia, Ahmedabad. I am a teacher by profession. I am writing

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letter for requesting to provide additional

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facilities in the municipal

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which is situated near to my house. There are very few pieces of equipment in the

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for doing any

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activity. The municipal

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includes a walking track, swings for children, lawn area for playing games. Let me explain, there are many other amenities required for young age people like a cricket net, lawn tennis, other

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types of equipment for doing exercise and many more which

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essential to make people healthy. There are many advantages for people

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spending time and doing

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in the

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, they can reduce their stress, feel relaxed and use their spare time in a positive manner.

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, they can interact with the local community and make friends and groups which will help them in other aspects of life. Hoping for a positive response from your side. Regards, Rashmi

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