You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you. Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have recently purchased a studio apartment in Perth which is in the vicinity of your shop. I would like to purchase some electronic equipment for my apartment and writing to inquire about the availability of those products.
I require a toaster, a hand blender, a microwave oven, a big-size mixie, a juicer, a dishwasher and a couple of fans along with a dozen LED lights. I would like you to appraise me regarding their availability (off the shelf) in your shop. In the case of an affirmative response, you may
also
provide a quote for all the above-mentioned items, at the earliest. On the contrary
, if the items are not in stock, would it be convenient for you to place an order for the entire lot for me? You must also
mention discounts if any, brand name and product specifications for those items.
I have plans to drop down in the week following this
weekend, which happens to be on the 17th of September. I would also
humbly request you to inform me of the duration till the time you will be able to retain the electronic equipment for me.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Neeraj MehraSubmitted by uluga2002 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite