Today, many people use the internet and smartphones to transfer money to friends, family, and businesses. Is this a positive or negative development?

• In our modern life, technology has been developing for

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mettle of fact, nowadays the majority of individuals prefer to

transfer

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money

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from

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account

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an account

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to

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another account

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account

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it is the best way to save

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time. In

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essay, I will discuss the positive and negative

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of transferring

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through

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and mobile

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. • There is no doubt that there are many positive

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than negative

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of utilizing the

internet

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telephone to

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money

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to

other

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account

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of all, one of the

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greatest developments

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everybody is able to

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them anytime and

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places

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without any difficulties. As a matter of fact, nowadays many humans try to use mobile

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and the

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to carry

of

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money

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rather than go to the office, because it is extremely fast and efficient for everyone.

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, my elder brother studies abroad and one day he needed

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for his study.

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my mother had to send

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and she did not have enough time to go to the bank, so she

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send

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through the

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on her mobile phone and since that day we use only

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transfer

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money

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through the

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. • To be sure, there are some negative

effects

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of utilizing the

internet

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to

transfer

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money

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to relatives and businesses. One of the biggest negative

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is not very

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because nowadays there

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an increase

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number of hackers. They are to withdraw

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on

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your

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own

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any

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at any

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time.

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everybody should be careful when they send

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analysis, despite the fact that, utilizing the

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and smartphones to

transfer

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money

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to

other

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another account

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account

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. It is extremely comfortable and efficient. For

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reason, I am convinced that utilizing the

internet

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and mobile

phones

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to

transfer

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money

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is a positive development in general.