Today, many people use the internet and smartphones to transfer money to friends, family, and businesses. Is this a positive or negative development?

• In our modern life, technology has been developing for
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and as
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mettle of fact, nowadays the majority of individuals prefer to
transfer
money
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account
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to
other
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another account
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account
.I strongly believe that
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it is the best way to save
the
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time. In
this
essay, I will discuss the positive and negative
effects
of transferring
money
through
the
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and mobile
phones
. • There is no doubt that there are many positive
effects
than negative
effects
of utilizing the
internet
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an
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telephone to
transfer
money
to
other
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another account
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account
.
First
of all, one of the
most
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greatest developments
are
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everybody is able to
uses
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them anytime and
every
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places
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without any difficulties. As a matter of fact, nowadays many humans try to use mobile
phones
and the
internet
to carry
of
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money
rather than go to the office, because it is extremely fast and efficient for everyone.
For example
, my elder brother studies abroad and one day he needed
money
for his study.
Thus
my mother had to send
money
and she did not have enough time to go to the bank, so she
chose
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send
money
through the
internet
on her mobile phone and since that day we use only
transfer
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money
through the
Internet
. • To be sure, there are some negative
effects
of utilizing the
internet
to
transfer
money
to relatives and businesses. One of the biggest negative
effects
it
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is not very
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because nowadays there
are
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an increase
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increase
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number of hackers. They are to withdraw
money
on
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your
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own
account
any
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time.
Thus
everybody should be careful when they send
money
through the
internet
and mobile
phones
. • In
final
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analysis, despite the fact that, utilizing the
internet
and smartphones to
transfer
money
to
other
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another account
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account
. It is extremely comfortable and efficient. For
this
reason, I am convinced that utilizing the
internet
and mobile
phones
to
transfer
money
is a positive development in general.
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