Today, many people use the internet and smartphones to transfer money to friends, family, and businesses.Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, the majority of individuals are having a hard time reaching
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on whether using
internet
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and mobile phones to deliver cash to family members is a negative or a positive trend among humans. From my way of thinking, paying online is a positive development. There is no doubt that
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there are several oblivious positive sides of utilising telephones to give
money
by phone. One advantage is saving time since inhabitants do not oblige to wait in the
bank
, as a consequence they are able to transfer
money
more immediately.
Moreover
, carrying
money
through the internet is the better method to pay not only daylighted hours but
also
they may do during
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hours
in
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a day .
For instance
, if someone
need
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money
, they will ask
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help from their relatives and they take some cash
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their private mobile devices even
in
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the
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midnight. To be sure,
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transferring
transfering
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transferring
through the network has some negative effects
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mankind. It is undeniable that technology is developed
thus
professional hackers are many all over the world and if they determine somebody's personal
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data
datas
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data
such
as email address, phone number and so on , they are able to manage
others
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bank
accounts easily. Take New York
bank
as an example, a couple of years ago one kid who is ten years old , broke the
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security and
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stole ten billion dollars from
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a national
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bank
.
However
, a day after her father gave all amount of
money
back. In
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analysis, despite
of
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the fact that
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cash on the internet is becoming commonly accessible among both elders and adolescents because of saving time. For
this
reason, I am convinced that
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online is a positive development in general.
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