Today, many people use the internet and smartphones to transfer money to friends, family, and businesses.Is this a positive or negative development?

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on whether using

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the internet

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and mobile phones to deliver cash to family members is a negative or a positive trend among humans. From my way of thinking, paying online is a positive development. There is no doubt that

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there are several oblivious positive sides of utilising telephones to give

money

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by phone. One advantage is saving time since inhabitants do not oblige to wait in the

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, as a consequence they are able to transfer

money

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more immediately.

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, carrying

money

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through the internet is the better method to pay not only daylighted hours but

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they may do during

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hours

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a day .

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, if someone

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money

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, they will ask

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help from their relatives and they take some cash

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their private mobile devices even

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midnight. To be sure,

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transferring

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transferring

through the network has some negative effects

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mankind. It is undeniable that technology is developed

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professional hackers are many all over the world and if they determine somebody's personal

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data

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data

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as email address, phone number and so on , they are able to manage

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bank

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accounts easily. Take New York

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as an example, a couple of years ago one kid who is ten years old , broke the

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bank

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security and

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stole ten billion dollars from

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bank

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, a day after her father gave all amount of

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back. In

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analysis, despite

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the fact that

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cash on the internet is becoming commonly accessible among both elders and adolescents because of saving time. For

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reason, I am convinced that

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online is a positive development in general.