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Today, many people use the internet and smartphones to transfer money to friends, family, and businesses.Is this a positive or negative development?

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In
this
 modern era, online transaction is growing very rapidly, whereas
people
 hardly use hand cash. Development of
this
 scenario has positive and negative
sides
 and both
sides
 discuss below. Nowadays, most
people
 are using smartphones and they are most comfortable transferring
money
 or
payment
 via the
internet
. The reason behind
this
,
people
 do not like to carry cash on their own, they felt
this
 is an extra hassle and a waste of time. Via the
internet
, they can order online and pay instantly and receive that particular product and service. Through
internet
 transactions, they can calculate their least of
money
. For businessmen, an online
payment
system
 become a blessing. The online
system
 makes business calculations very easier than before. It helps a business person calculate profit and loss in their business.
On the other hand
, there is some negative aspect that can stand up for online
payment
. Nowadays, hacking is one of the most threatening situations for all. It is very easy to hack someone's account and withdraw
money
. For online shopping, most
people
 forget about their expenditures, and
therefore
,
people
 buy unnecessary things and waste their
money
. To sum up, the
internet
 and online transaction make our life easier, more convenient, and more comfortable than past.
Although
 it has some negative
sides
, the positive
sides
 are more acceptable if the
system
 uses in a proper way. I prefer to use the
internet
 and online
payment
system
 to save
money
 and time.
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