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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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• In our modern life, many
students
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 try to learn new things that will be extremely beneficial for their
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career
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. Few individuals point out that, the majority of institution
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 should learn
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 that they love,
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 some humans believe that they should only be allowed to
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 that will be worthwhile in the
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 to science and new
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students
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 should try to learn information with will be
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 essay, I will discuss both points of individuals about university
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. • On the one hand, the majority of inhabitants believe that university
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 that will be extremely worthwhile for their
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 life, especially about science and modern
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 about modern
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 and it will be extremely beneficial for their
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. According to some statistics
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 countries
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 prefer to
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subjects
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 which will be important for their
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 rather than learning information that they want, because whenever they face difficulties, they can easily solve these difficulties based on the knowledge they have learned. •
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, some people believe that
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students
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 should learn whatever they desire, because If
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study
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 the subject they want, they can easily succeed because they enjoy everything they do and love their profession and it will be really easy to achieve their goals,
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 that If they learn a subject they do not like, they will give up quickly if they face any setbacks. •
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 some people think
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 should
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 whatever they like
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 because they can learn them easily and other individuals think that
students
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 should
study
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subjects
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 which will be worthwhile in the
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. I think they should learn
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 which
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science
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science
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
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  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
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