Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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to learn
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to science and technology.
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very beneficial for
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and all
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their knowledge.That's why grad students will be to create their future and they will learn many new things.
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another countries
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only one subject,he will be very clever it.After
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all scholars want more and more learning.
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world.As
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glaring topic of that,
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we might increase our chances.We branch of study one subject very good than to teach many
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analysis,despite the fact that teaching many
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future.In my opinion,teaching might all
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very well and
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their skills
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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