Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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Dear Justin, Congratulations! I am happy to hear that you’ve been offered a place at my university. It is not going to be easy but I am sure you will make it. I used to live in
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apartment complex on Main Street. It takes about 6 minutes to walk to the campus. The room is extremely tiny but it comes with a kitchen which is helpful when you don't have much money to spend on food. One way you can look for a new place is by using
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APP called Uniroom. I heard a lot of good things about it but the rooms there can be expensive in my opinion. I recommend you
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make a post with all the requirements that you have on Facebook. You’ll be surprised by how many messages you will receive. One thing to keep in mind is that there are apartments that charge water and waste. They should be provided for free to students in
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area by local laws. Best wishes, Bieber
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Familiarity
  • Comfort
  • Social ties
  • Family ties
  • Belonging
  • Resources
  • Opportunities
  • Fear
  • Unknown
  • Financial constraints
  • Cultural attachment
  • Language barriers
  • Limited education
  • Skills
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