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Experts say older people were happier and healthier in the past because they did more excercise and spend more time with their family and friends whereas now many suffer loneliness and health problems.What are the causes o this and what are some solutions

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Nowadays the prospect of problems in the senior communities
are
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 rising up, they suffer more health problems and loneliness. Truth
to
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be told,
this
 has been a problem for a while and it can trace back to the effect of
human's
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 lifestyle change in
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the industry
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industry
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revolution's
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 era. Loneliness is the one of
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psychological
phsycological
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psychological
disease
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 that can attack anyone no matter the age.
Therefore
, in
this
 case, senior
people
 tend to be left out by the young because
how
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 centralized the world
now
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. If someone
want
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 to afford a well-paid job and
a
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career development, they have to live in the
city
.
Although
, the problem is living in the
city
also
 cost so much money, if they want to save up some money they only can afford a small room to rent and they have to
work
 from 9-5 or more every workday, sometimes up to point they forget to take care of themselves.
Thus
, it is considered not a proper lifestyle to bring
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a parent
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parent
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 to live with them.
Furthermore
, with the change of life view,
people
 tend to be more conservative as they age so oftentimes there will be a clash between them and it is definitely an exhausting moment to feel.
For example
, in Indonesia
people
 tend to live in
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workplace
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is
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near
with
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home
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 because they
work
at
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the garden
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garden
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 and rice
field
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at
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the
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old age. But now, with the only chance to
paid
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 well by living in the
city
, the family is spreading out, moving to
other
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another city
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city
, and leaving their
childhood's
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 home.
Also
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 another example is coming from Japan, which had
high
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 rate of suicide
of
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 the old communities because
how
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 lonely they feel living alone
at
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suburban
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 era. The solution for
this
in my opinion
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 is to
decentralizing
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work
 opportunities and pay more amenable
wage
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for
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 the workers, so it will reach out more into
small
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town
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 and they do not have to move out just to
work
at
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 big cities which could make another kind of problem in the future. In conclusion, loneliness is
inevitable
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 disease
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an
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and
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 it
caused
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 by
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 cause of
system
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 to
making
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people
work
 in the
city
 and leaving their
childhood's
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 home. To solve
this
, the government can start by making the
workfield
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work field
 more
decentralize
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 into
small
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a small
the small
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town
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towns
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.
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