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ntly attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, • say where you think you left the papers • explain why they are so important • tell the manager what you want him/her to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in concern with my
documents
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, which I left behind during my stay at Sheraton, on November 25th 2022. Those are extremely important
documents
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, which
contains
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 a contract I need urgently. I stayed at your hotel
last
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 week in
the
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room 201 for one night where, I had a meeting
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 client in the morning and after the meeting, I left the hotel in a hurry as I had to catch the flight.
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, I left some important
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 in the drawer
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 the desk. It is in a brown file with my company name, Falcon Plastic Molding on the
first
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 page. Those papers have information, which I need to include in my presentation
this
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 Friday, and the whole presentation is depended on that particular information. I would really appreciate
if
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 you can mail
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documents
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 to me overnight and because it is my fault, I will pay for the express service. So,
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 send it to the address mentioned in the brown file. I would be waiting to hear from you.
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 Faithfully, Vimal Thakkar
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Dear Sir/Madam,
  • I am writing to inform you that I believe I left some important papers at your hotel.
  • To the best of my recollection, I left the papers in the conference room.
  • These papers are of utmost importance as they contain confidential business information.
  • I kindly request that you or your staff check the conference room and securely send the papers to my address.
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