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Some people think that employers should give staff at least four weeks holiday per year to improve their job performance. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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The vacation is important for
staff
 and it is corrected by state rules.The
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employees
employers
employeers
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employees
 understand if they have goals to have motivated and strong
workers
 ,should give
staff
 holiday.There are a few reasons why
workers
 should be given a rest for at least
four
weeks
.
Firstly
four
weeks
 per year is the minimal quantity by government's rules and employers have to keep it if do not want to have problems with justice.,
Secondly
 the 4
weeks
 is above one month and it is clear that from 12 months working days one month for leisure it is accurate.
Thus
 companies would be glad to have motivated
staff
 because it improves performance and job quality.
Although
 there are companies that give holidays of more than
four
weeks
 and give an opportunity to choose at what time employees want to have a rest.
For example
 from six working months employees can take 12 days off. On other hand, some
workers
 do not want to have a rest and prefer to work and make
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 with their supervisors rejecting holidays. To conclude I am more inclined to think that I agree to
have
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 at least
four
 week holiday because it improves performance and it is important for either
staff
 and or companies ,particularly managers who immediately work with people.There are arisen difficulties when working with unmotivated and sad
workers
.
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