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Some people think that schools should reward students with the best academic results, while others believe it is more important to reward students who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #schools #reward #students #results #show #improvements
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performance
 quality could enhance by
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rewards
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 significantly. Several individuals consider that schools must
reward
students
 who got the best academic
results
, but others suppose it is more significant to
reward
 the
students
 who
are show
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are showing
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the
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enhancement in their academic
educational
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education
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.
This
 essay will discuss these two views in terms of
engouragement
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encouragement
 to do
the
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apply
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better and
performance
reward
.
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One
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one
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the one
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 hand of
this
 issue, many
students
 help to improve their academic
results
 by their
family
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families
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, who might provide
for
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apply
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them
tutors
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with tutors
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.
This
 mean,
reward
for
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apply
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student
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a student
the student
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 who got
an
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apply
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excellence regarding
to
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academic result can consider unfair and
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 other
who
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whom
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have independence
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independence
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on
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from
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 their family due to their
level
 of
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 can lead to frustration in all aspects of their life.
For example
, if schools may make
a competitions
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competitions
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 every week and engorgement all
students
 to
improvement
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improve
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 regardless
their
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of their
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results
, it can be
a
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apply
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fair. As
result
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a result
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 of
this
, because of academic
performance
, we should not
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judge
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 the
students
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student's
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 educational
performance
 justify,
however
, rely on other things to make them better
its
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 an impressive idea On
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other hand
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 of
this
 issue,
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the reward
a reward
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reward
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rewards
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 can enhance
student's
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students'
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performance
. To clear
this
, many
students
 are genius but they need only
pushing
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push
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 forward to
doing
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do
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 their best.
For instance
,
reward
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rewarding
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 several
students
 in other ways regardless
their
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of their
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results
,
it
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can be ruling
the
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level
 of them in order to perform integral
level
.
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Therefore
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Therefore
, in my
opinion
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i
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think
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reward
merely
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are merely
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 gadget
for
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to
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 tender
the
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apply
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incentive to
students
 in all aspects of education. To
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summarize
summrize
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summarise
, it might not be possible to cover all aspects of
this
 issue.
However
,
this
 essay focuses only on
engouragement
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encouragement
 to do
the
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apply
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better and
performance
reward
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rewards
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. The most important points
have
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that have
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 been mentioned are we should
encouragement
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encourage
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 the
student
 to
level
 up their educational
results
 regardless
their
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of their
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 circumstance and
reward
 the
student
 it a gadget way to incentive educational
level
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levels
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in
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on
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 all sides.
Finally
, it can be said that all
student
 possess traits in
educational
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the educational
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 field, but most of them
needs
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 motivation to
doing
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do
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 their best.
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