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You and your friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were extremely dissatisfied with the experience. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: Explain the reason for the celebration. Give details of your visit to the restaurant. Say what you would like the restaurant to do.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
 letter to express my dissatisfaction with the
food
 served at your restaurant
last
 Monday. I am hoping that you take the necessary action to improve your
food
 quality and service In order to maintain your reputation. It was my father's 60th birthday on 12th April 2022 so I decided to throw a party for all my family members and friends. I had a couple of options on my list but your
food
 court is at a convenient location for all the people coming to the function. That's why I had chosen your hotel for the celebration. We visited your place on 11th April 2022, at around 4 PM in the evening and we were sitting on the left corner seat. The meals served were not cooked properly and it was spicy too so the people who ate the
food
 had a problem. In fact, I requested the cook to make it less spicy but they did not do it as I said. I would recommend you take the necessary action on the respective department to maintain your reputation and
also
, would suggest trying the
food
 before serving it to the customers. Look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Venkatesh Ravichandran
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