As part of a student social survey project, you are organising a group to visit a historical exhibition in a small town, Write a letter asking for information regarding such things as the contents of the exhibition, and the dates of its opening and closing, and if there are any discounts available.

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Dear Sir / Madam, Greetings of the day! I am writing

this

letter to inquire

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details about the historical

exhibition

at Batavia which is usually organized around

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the fall

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season during the month of September. I am a Sociology major student at

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Ohio University. I am working on arranging a visit to the

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historical

exhibition

for our final semester project which requires conducting a social survey on historical

artifacts

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and culture. In order to prepare

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survey questionnaire for the project I request more information on the historical displays at the

exhibition

this

year.

Also

, please let me know the dates of the

exhibition

, day timings for the visitors, including any special events that may be useful for our study. We are a group of 15 students who would need

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tickets to the historical

exhibition

for the entire duration of the event. Are there any discounts or promotions for a bulk inquiry, especially considering the student project cause? Your consideration will be much appreciated. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Faithfully, Darshit Nimavat

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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As part of a student social survey project, you are organising a group to visit a historical exhibition in a small town, Write a letter asking for information regarding such things as the contents of the exhibition, and the dates of its opening and closing, and if there are any discounts available.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Many people today prefer to eat locally produced food. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh disadvantages for the environment and economy?

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctor and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training.Others believe they should be free to work in the country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people are changing their careers. what are the reasons for changing? and can there be any positive or negative impact by person or by society as whole.

Stress-related illnesses are becoming increasingly common. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Many university graduates cannot find a job in their chosen profession What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, should be done about it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience