Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Other disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent years tourism has

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crucial impact on the

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rate of the economy

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the world. In terms of respecting

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the local

cultures

, some individuals think that

tourists

should obey the

rules

of local

cultures

, while others, including me, believe that locals should welcome

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different

cultures

. The

first

group has some reasons for being mandatory of following the local

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rules

.

First

of all, they believe that

tourists

should respect

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the local culture of

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because it shows their kindness and politeness.

In addition

,

tourism

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industry should not lead to

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the calmness of local people.

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youngsters are keen on drinking alcoholic beverages and listening

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loudly

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a trip. But in an Islamic

society

like UAE or Turkey, locals do not like these

behaviors

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.

Finally

, the experience of obeying local

rules

is one of the futures of a trip to

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tourist attraction.

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, some European women who have a trip to

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East can have the experience of wearing hijab. As mentioned earlier, others believe that

tourists

should not follow the local cultural

rules

. They think that locals should improve

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tolerant

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and can tolerate

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cultures

and beliefs to live better in the host

society

.

In addition

, if

tourists

behave according to their

cultures

freely, individuals who live in the destination can learn new things about different

cultures

. It nurtures the local culture and they can have a better relationship with the world.

Finally

, respecting

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the freedom of individuals, including

tourists

, is a precious value in the world. So, if a

society

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its respect

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this

value,

tourists

will go more to

this

country and it can boost the local economy. To conclude, I believe that

tourists

do not follow the local

rules

and the host

society

should respect their freedom, because of cultural diversity and

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of freedom.