Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Other disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In recent years tourism has
a
crucial impact on the Add a missing verb
had a
growing
rate of the economy Replace the word
growth
in
the world. In terms of respecting Change preposition
of
to
the local Change preposition
apply
cultures
, some individuals think that tourists
should obey the rules
of local cultures
, while others, including me, believe that locals should welcome to
different Change preposition
apply
cultures
.
The first
group has some reasons for being mandatory of following the local culture
Replace the word
cultural
rules
. First
of all, they believe that tourists
should respect to
the local culture of Change preposition
apply
destination
Add an article
the destination
a destination
,
because it shows their kindness and politeness. Remove the comma
apply
In addition
, tourism
industry should not lead to Add an article
the tourism
disturb
the calmness of local people. Change the verb form
disturbing
For example
, most of
Change preposition
apply
the
youngsters are keen on drinking alcoholic beverages and listening Correct article usage
apply
music
loudly Change preposition
to music
in
a trip. But in an Islamic Change preposition
on
society
like UAE or Turkey, locals do not like these behaviors
. Change the spelling
behaviours
Finally
, the experience of obeying local rules
is one of the futures of a trip to the
tourist attraction. Correct article usage
a
For example
, some European women who have a trip to Middle
East can have the experience of wearing hijab.
As mentioned earlier, others believe that Correct article usage
the Middle
tourists
should not follow the local cultural rules
. They think that locals should improve their
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they're
they are
tolerant
and can tolerate Replace the word
tolerance
different
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of different
cultures
and beliefs to live better in the host society
. In addition
, if tourists
behave according to their cultures
freely, individuals who live in the destination can learn new things about different cultures
. It nurtures the local culture and they can have a better relationship with the world. Finally
, respecting to
the freedom of individuals, including Change preposition
apply
tourists
, is a precious value in the world. So, if a society
show
its respect Change the verb form
shows
to
Change preposition
for
this
value, tourists
will go more to this
country and it can boost the local economy.
To conclude, I believe that tourists
do not follow the local rules
and the host society
should respect their freedom, because of cultural diversity and value
of freedom.Correct article usage
the value
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