Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subject like Sciences and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views.

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field each and every
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give people different things to learn . Few people
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History
which is
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oldest
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should be more highlight and help students to learn it while
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some Individuals says that living in
this
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science
and technology must be major topic to teach in tutions .
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agree with
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statement but I would like to give my views and opinion in
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Firstly
,
History
is one of the ancient
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theories
and every
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human beings
human being
human being's
love to read and write it with
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face .
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Government
also
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force
student
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students
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and parents to give importance to
history
because there are
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myriad
of mysterious things in our
history
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, seeing
history
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also
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/
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to get
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about our past pupils .
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, a lot of
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teachs
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teachers
teaches
history
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main subject because by learning it children can sharpen their
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and
also
help them to fight
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against
our enemy whilst some of the movies are
also
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history
so it becomes easy for beings to understand .
For Instance
, Ramanujan who is
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alled
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called
god of mathematics
he
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has
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his own
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biography
and
teacher
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also
teach
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children about them
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one of the greatest
film maker
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filmmaker
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has made a picture
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him and every Single
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are
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proved
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.
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we seldom give a thought to
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over
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side of the essay nowadays every single
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are getting at
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its peak
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with help of
science
and technology .
Moreover
, mankind
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living
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king life
they can
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call
their kith and
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in
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second
with help of
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technology
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.
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the center
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center
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of learning
help
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childrens
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children
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to learn new things and get
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an idea
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about new development held by
science
and technology .
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,
science
is
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of
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life and inventions are over
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.
Last
but not
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Least
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,
plethora
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a plethora
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of
persons
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choose
science
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field after their
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graduation
becuase
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because
it
also
help
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to
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get
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future than other skills . To cite
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example , as per
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article published in " THE HUFFINGTON POST" 65% of
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the foreign
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public love to take
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a job
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job
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in
research
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the research
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field and they come
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for
further
studies. In Conclusion , both modules
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proactive in
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own place but I would suggest every citizen
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see
history
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the history
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of their country and
also
teach their family members .
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