More and more families are choosing fast food over home-cooked meals. What are the reasons for this and how can they be addressed?
A vast amount of
familie’s
preferences Correct your spelling
families
family’s
are now belonged
Change to the active voice
now belong
have now belonged
for
junk Change preposition
to
food
rather than one which was cooked at home. Nowadays a lot of people
spend money for
fast Change preposition
on
food
and bad impact for
health. The solution for Change preposition
on
this
problem
can be solved by learning how to cook
and there should be created some priorities. This
essay will examine the main causes of fast food
and possible solutions of
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to
this
problem
.
The two main causes of food
ordering are laziness
and inability
to Correct article usage
the inability
cook
. Nowadays the
most Correct article usage
apply
of
Change preposition
apply
people
cannot cook
, because they have not
Correct your spelling
no
skills
for Change the verb form
skilled
this
, but they may learn to cook
for
the internet. To illustrate, some family cooking with the internet, because they have Change preposition
on
Add the particle
tonot
not
experience Correct your spelling
no
for
cooking. As for Change preposition
with
laziness
, a large number of today’s human
become lazy. It is a very big Fix the agreement mistake
humans
problem
same for other things. Laziness
appear
due to the fact that there are more amenities and technologies. Change the verb form
appears
For example
, nowadays has
café and Unnecessary verb
apply
food
delivery, it is comfortable, but bad
Add an article
a bad
habit
for human.
Some possible solutions to this
problem
are learning to cook
and get
rid of Wrong verb form
getting
laziness
habit
. Thus
ways
a great number of Correct your spelling
was
people
can save money and laziness
will be less. First
solution is Change the article
The first
get
rid of bad Fix the infinitive
to get
habit
, Fix the agreement mistake
habits
second
quick fix refuse
Change the verb form
refuses
of
junk foods. As for Change preposition
apply
experience
, they can learn Add an article
the experience
from
Change preposition
apply
the
with the help of the Internet or ask to teach Correct article usage
apply
from
others. Change preposition
apply
For instance
, some people
can go order cook
lessons and after time
they will be cooking by themselves.
Correct quantifier usage
some time
To
conclusion, a large number of Change preposition
In
Add an article
the family
family
prefer Fix the agreement mistake
families
order
Add the particle
to order
food
from café and restaurant
, because they do not want Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
losing
time Change the verb form
to lose
for
cooking and there are Change preposition
apply
have
two Unnecessary verb
apply
solution
, Change to a plural noun
solutions
clear
out Wrong verb form
clearing
laziness
habit
and learning Fix the agreement mistake
habits
cook
.Fix the infinitive
to cook
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