More and more families are choosing fast food over home-cooked meals. What are the reasons for this and how can they be addressed?
A vast amount of
familie’s
preferences Correct your spelling
families
family’s
are now belonged
Change to the active voice
now belong
have now belonged
for
junk Change preposition
to
food
rather than one which was cooked at home. Nowadays a lot of Use synonyms
people
spend money Use synonyms
for
fast Change preposition
on
food
and bad impact Use synonyms
for
health. The solution for Change preposition
on
this
Linking Words
problem
can be solved by learning how to Use synonyms
cook
and there should be created some priorities. Use synonyms
This
essay will examine the main causes of fast Linking Words
food
and possible solutions Use synonyms
of
Change preposition
to
this
Linking Words
problem
.
The two main causes of Use synonyms
food
ordering are Use synonyms
laziness
and Use synonyms
inability
to Correct article usage
the inability
cook
. Nowadays Use synonyms
the
most Correct article usage
apply
of
Change preposition
apply
people
cannot Use synonyms
cook
, because they have Use synonyms
not
Correct your spelling
no
skills
for Change the verb form
skilled
this
, but they may learn to Linking Words
cook
Use synonyms
for
the internet. To illustrate, some family cooking with the internet, because they have Change preposition
on
Add the particle
tonot
not
experience Correct your spelling
no
for
cooking. As for Change preposition
with
laziness
, a large number of today’s Use synonyms
human
become lazy. It is a very big Fix the agreement mistake
humans
problem
same for other things. Use synonyms
Laziness
Use synonyms
appear
due to the fact that there are more amenities and technologies. Change the verb form
appears
For example
, nowadays Linking Words
has
café and Unnecessary verb
apply
food
delivery, it is comfortable, but Use synonyms
bad
Add an article
a bad
habit
for human.
Some possible solutions to Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
problem
are learning to Use synonyms
cook
and Use synonyms
get
rid of Wrong verb form
getting
laziness
Use synonyms
habit
. Use synonyms
Thus
Linking Words
ways
a great number of Correct your spelling
was
people
can save money and Use synonyms
laziness
will be less. Use synonyms
Linking Words
First
solution is Change the article
The first
get
rid of bad Fix the infinitive
to get
Use synonyms
habit
, Fix the agreement mistake
habits
second
quick fix Linking Words
refuse
Change the verb form
refuses
of
junk foods. As for Change preposition
apply
experience
, they can learn Add an article
the experience
from
Change preposition
apply
the
with the help of the Internet or ask to teach Correct article usage
apply
from
others. Change preposition
apply
For instance
, some Linking Words
people
can go order Use synonyms
cook
lessons and after Use synonyms
time
they will be cooking by themselves.
Correct quantifier usage
some time
To
conclusion, a large number of Change preposition
In
Add an article
the family
family
prefer Fix the agreement mistake
families
order
Add the particle
to order
food
from café and Use synonyms
restaurant
, because they do not want Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
losing
time Change the verb form
to lose
for
cooking and there are Change preposition
apply
have
two Unnecessary verb
apply
solution
, Change to a plural noun
solutions
clear
out Wrong verb form
clearing
laziness
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
habit
and learning Fix the agreement mistake
habits
Use synonyms
cook
.Fix the infinitive
to cook
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite