One of friends has just had a twin and for some reason you can not go visit them in their town

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Dear Sir or Madam Hello Linda .
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am Malika recently
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hear you had a baby.
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so happy for you . But
firstly
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can not go to see you so
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am writing
this
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letter to say sorry and coming
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to
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these days
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may visit your home to see you and your tiny twins You know
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study abroad
also
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work in there. When
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here
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hear
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you had a baby
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try to go to Uzbekistan but
unfortunality
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unfortunately
there was no ticket for that day only there was it for
next
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week so
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could not visit . I was surprised when
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know you had twin babies .
lrelly
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really
wonder to their
look
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looked
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like. I think
,
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apply
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will hard to
seperate
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separate
their
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could not go but
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can send present for your twins . But
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do not know
they
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if they
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are boys or girls so
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send present can fit for both
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assume my parents like you I hope that you do not upset me . And
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promise as soon as
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arrive
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go
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to go
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your home to see you and your twins
Your
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Yours
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faithfully Malika
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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