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You recently received your grade from your instructor and you are dissatisfied with your score. Write a letter to your instructor and • introduce yourself. • let him know that you are dissatisfied with your grade. • mention the reasons to convince him that you deserve a better grade

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physics teacher. Hello, my physics teacher. How are you? I am your student studying in class 10-A. Yesterday I went up to the board to talk about a
topic
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 in your lesson. I spoke less because you told me I do not have
time
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.
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 you gave me an unsatisfactory grade. I have
offended
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 assessment. Because I had read the subject well. Only because you said that there is not enough
time
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 to talk less, I could not talk about the
topic
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 fully. If you had not said that, I would have covered the whole
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 I deserved a better grade. Teacher, I would like to ask you to give me
time
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 when I go to the blackboard to talk about the
topic
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 in the
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 lesson. I will prove that I deserve a good grade
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time
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. I hope that you respond
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 letter soon. Your student. Odil.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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