Write a letter to a friend who is coming to stay at your apartment while you are away on vacation. In your letter, • Tell him/ her about your flat. • Give him/ her some instructions about his/ her stay. • Tell him/ her what to do in case of problem.

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Dear Georg, How are you? I'm sorry it's been so long but I'm excited that you're coming here to London. But sad to say I'd be away during your visit. I'll be attending a business conference in Asia, so I can't postpone it. As for my flat, it is on

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Peter Church. My flat number is 234. I will leave my house keys with my neighbour, Mrs Robins who lives in Flat number 235. Upon your arrival, you can take the keys from her. During the length of your stay, please don't forget to feed my dog, Bench. He's a Labrador and I'm pretty sure he'll like you. Another thing, I know you love music, but most of my neighbours are quite sensitive to noise so please don't play the music system at high volumes. Now, in case, you experience any problems during your stay, feel free to call me on my mobile number. I hope you'll enjoy your stay! Warm regards, Beth

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7 paragraphs

168 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to a friend who is coming to stay at your apartment while you are away on vacation. In your letter, • Tell him/ her about your flat. • Give him/ her some instructions about his/ her stay. • Tell him/ her what to do in case of problem.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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