you have received a letter from your band, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. however, the card was missing from the envelope. write a letter to the bank head office. in your letter explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do.

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Dear Sir / Madam, I would like to inform you that I didn't receive my new credit

card

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which I requested a month ago.

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, I would like to say that I received the letter from your bank which is requested to accept the credit

card

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but there was no

card

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enclosed with the envelope. I believe that it has misplaced during the packing stage because there was no physical damage to the envelope before opening it. I am Samantha Jayasekara and has been connecting with your bank since 2016 my current account number is 02541616541.

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, It is kindly requested to deactivate the

card

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immediately to prevent its misusing of it.

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, I would like to request you send the new

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to the branch at Kaluthara.

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I will collect it from that branch because it is the safest way to collect it with the witness. Thank you for your favourable reply Yours faithfully, S Jayasekara

jds.sampathSat Dec 10 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

158 words

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