you and some friends ate a meal at a resturant to celebrte a special ocaasion , and you were very pleased with the food and service. write a letter to the resturant manager , in you letter give a detail of your visit to the resturant explain the reason for the celebration say what was good about the food and service

dear sir
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Dear Sir
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/madam I am writing to thank you for your delicious food and your polite staff.
last
week I was crossing the street and suddenly I saw your billboard, your design is so eyeful and your restaurant is bright. Yesterday we had a dressy occasion for my birthday , I invited all of my friends and my colleagues to your place ,
Fortunately
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Fortunately,
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your dining room is spacious enough for my party and
i
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had reserved live music. As I said your waiters were polite and handsome
besides
your food was
water mouthing
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.
Although
your seafood is a little bit expensive,It is worth it. my friends had not eaten velvet cake before but they said thanks to your chef,
on the other
hand
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your
band
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music is professional , I love the music they played . menu of
this
saloon is various because we could choose anything we want like pizza or fast food and pasta even different kinds of salads. I have to say I used to eat meat but now I am a vegetarian and I was satisfied with your salad.
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the
end
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I do recommend other people to come to your location for dinner. On behalf of my guests thank you for your help and support in advance. yours faithfully Saed Tavazoie
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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