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Nowadays young people know less about traditions and culture than in the past. What are the reasons for it? Is this a positive development or a negative development?

#people #traditions #culture #development
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past
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both young and old, but recently, young adults have fewer or no knowledge about
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.
This
 is because of
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 of exposure to cultural heritage and
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 in modern ideas. In my own opinion,
this
 is a negative development.
To begin
 with, inadequate guidance and accessibility to ancient heritage
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 a detrimental effect on young
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individual
individuals
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Museums
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is
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 of a place to learn and rewind
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how traditions are been
practiced
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.
In addition
, going to
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 or viewing to see videos or drama of history but
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 lifestyle
modofucation
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modification
 has set in whereby
individual
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individuals
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 take much of
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their
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 time learning white traditions.
For example
, a neighbour of mine
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 going to cinemas to see American
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 aired movies
instead
 of local movies.
Secondly
, modern thought has encapsulated young ones to the extent they
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 not have
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 in
culture
anylonger
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any longer
.
For example
,
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reasearch
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research
 has shown that about 85% of people like wearing modern clothing.
This
 is a bad development because it erases our mind off our
culture
 which inturns make us
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inculcale
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inculcate
 habits that
isnt
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isn't
is
 part of our
culture
 into practice. In conclusion, inadequate exposure to
traditons
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traditions
 and
increase
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an increase
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 in modern ideas are the reasons why
youger
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younger
 people have little understanding
about
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culture
 and with
this
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 it is a negative development.
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