First impressions are often considered to be important. Some people think that doing well in interviews is how you secure a good job. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give relevant examples wherever possible.

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people
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judgement through the
first
and foremost feeling. But some people consider that successfully facing to interview is
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prominent way to acquire
the
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good job. I totally
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agree
with
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statement and will provide
further
details for my agreement in
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essay.
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of our talents, thoughts and feeling. Most
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careers
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conclude the interview to get an idea about the candidate with how far he/she can manage the particular job role.
However
, in interviews candidates
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their talent and
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also
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that in
first
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impression. Even without qualifications
such
candidates are
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to perform
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in
live
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work environment.
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television and radio broadcasters are selecting those candidates under the
first
impression.
On the other hand
, in some careers are
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outlook is
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wanted qualification
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • First impressions
  • Interviews
  • Securing
  • Communication
  • Preparation
  • Research
  • Performance
  • Qualifications
  • Confidence
  • Body language
  • Networking
  • Recommendations
  • Follow-up
  • Technology
  • Social media
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