Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for. Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation?
Many individuals for their livelihood,
doing
Wrong verb form
do
jobs
without an
interest or without any Remove the article
apply
talent
relating to the job. I will be discussing, why it happens and the consequences of the situation.
Firstly
, the major cause of why people
are doing such
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the such
a such
unrelative
Correct article usage
an unrelative
job
is, they are not aware of what they are interested Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
for
. Change the preposition
in
Additionally
, according to the
recent survey, more than 70% of the Correct article usage
a
people
in USA
are doing their Correct article usage
the USA
jobs
without an
interest. Correct article usage
apply
On the other hand
, parents nowadays, emphasising
their Wrong verb form
emphasise
offsprings
to only concentrate on education even Fix the agreement mistake
offspring
on
their leisure time. Change preposition
in
For instance
, a child may be very much interested on
art Change the preposition
in
such
as music, dance, craft, etc but their parents are focusing them
only Correct pronoun usage
apply
for
education. Change preposition
on
As a result
, when that child Add a missing verb
is grown
grown
, he/she doing their Wrong verb form
grows
jobs
just Fix the agreement mistake
job
make
money.
Needless to say, many Fix the infinitive
to make
people
nowadays, were affected by the
stress or depression due to their unrelated Correct article usage
apply
livelihood
. If a person is forced to do Fix the agreement mistake
livelihoods
the
job with zero Correct article usage
a
talent
or interest, he/she will certainly end up with the
chronic stress. Correct article usage
apply
As a result
, both mental and physical will be spoiled. On the other hand
, to over come
Correct your spelling
overcome
this
issue, many schools were taking some precocious steps by encouraging the children to do what they are interested for
. Change the preposition
in
For instance
, If a child has a goal to improve their talent
on something, the school is taking care to improve their talent
and encouraging them to do so.
In conclusion, the major cause for doing uninterested jobs
among the people
is because they are not well aware of what they are interested for
. Due to Change the preposition
in
this
, people
are ended with chronic stress or depression.Submitted by usprem02 on
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