Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for. Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation?

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jobs
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without
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interest or without any
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relating to the job. I will be discussing, why it happens and the consequences of the situation.
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, the major cause of why
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are doing
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job
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is, they are not aware of what they are interested
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.
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, according to
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recent survey, more than 70% of the
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are doing their
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without
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interest.
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, parents nowadays,
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their
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to only concentrate on education even
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their leisure time.
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, a child may be very much interested
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art
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as music, dance, craft, etc but their parents are focusing
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only
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education.
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, when that child
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, he/she doing their
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jobs
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just
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money. Needless to say, many
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nowadays, were affected by
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stress or depression due to their unrelated
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. If a person is forced to do
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job with zero
talent
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or interest, he/she will certainly end up with
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chronic stress.
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, both mental and physical will be spoiled.
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, to
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this
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issue, many schools were taking some precocious steps by encouraging the children to do what they are interested
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.
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, If a child has a goal to improve their
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on something, the school is taking care to improve their
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and encouraging them to do so. In conclusion, the major cause for doing uninterested
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among the
people
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is because they are not well aware of what they are interested
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. Due to
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,
people
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are ended with chronic stress or depression.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • dread
  • passion
  • inherent talent
  • fufilling
  • career
  • job
  • fulfilled
  • unhappy
  • unsatisfied
  • work-life balance
  • burnout
  • stress
  • depression
  • anxiety
  • self-esteem
  • emotional well-being
  • potential
  • achieve
  • success
  • personal growth
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