There are plans to build a new factory in Parkland near where you live. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: -Give reasons why you are against the plan; -Explain why the parkland should stay; -Suggest what action the council should take;

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Dear Sir or Madam, Greetings of the day! I am writing

this

letter on behalf of the residents of

the

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Clermont county to file a complaint against the

construction

plan of a new factory in

Parkland

. There are several reasons for the community members within

Parkland

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the Parkland

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area to be in disagreement

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a new factory building

construction

Parkland

is the only place available for the residents of

this

area to carry out recreation and wellness activities. It

also

holds

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sentimental value in people's

heart

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since

Parkland

has a wall that pays tribute to all the local soldiers who lost their lives in the civil war. It is important to note that

Parkland

is one of the largest garden areas in

this

county and altering

this

property can have a significant environmental impact. Considering all the factors mentioned above it is critical for

Parkland

to stay to be able to provide a public park in the community and

sustaining

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the green cover in the area while

also

maintaining

it's

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historical significance. The

consencus

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consensus

of the people is that it is highly imperative to cancel the

construction

plan of a new factory building in place of

Parkland

. Kindly take

necessary

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steps to put a 'STAY ORDER' on the

construction

work with immediate effect. Looking forward to your positive response and prompt

actions

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. Yours Faithfully, Darshit Nimavat

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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There are plans to build a new factory in Parkland near where you live. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: -Give reasons why you are against the plan; -Explain why the parkland should stay; -Suggest what action the council should take;

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