These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages?

In contemporary society, the laptop and
cellphone
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are becoming more and more universal as the rapid development of technology.
Therefore
, working at
home
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be an effortless thing for many individuals. There are many pros and cons to doing
jobs
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people
’s own houses. And I maintain that working at
home
can bring far more disadvantages than working in offices.
First,
we have to admit that working at
home
can save a great deal of time. Usually,
people
live a distance
far
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away
their
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workplace so they have to drive or take a bicycle to get
the
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office
to check in.
Sometime
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, they may be stuck in
the
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traffic jam for a long time.
Thus
, doing
jobs
at
home
prevent
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people
from
involving
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in these problems. Not only has
it
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advantages for individuals it
also
contributes to the decreasing of spending in
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.
Furthermore
, the expenditure would have a sharp decrease because
less
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people
work in the
office
. When all the staff work in the
office
, the leaders or
managers
have to rent a huge place to accommodate all of
staff
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the staff
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.
However
, it is not still a problem now.
In addition
,
less
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fewer
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people
in the
office
means that the
managers
don’t need to pay the clearing
company
much. And
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saving money can be
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a rewards
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rewards
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reward
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for
staffs
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staff
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who bring more financial
benefit
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benefits
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to the firm, encouraging them to work harder.
On the contrary
, working at
home
can cause more detrimental effects
for
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the
developments
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development
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and
management
of the
company
. At
first,
it is not uncommon that
people
working at
home
is not efficient and they cannot concentrate on their own
jobs
instead
of doing something which can make them unwind and joyful. Low efficiency could
a
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serious problem in that case.
Besides
, uniform
management
is the crucial basis for a celebrated or
a
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successful
company
. When most or all of the employees do their
job
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jobs
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at
home
, the
managers
cannot communicate with them face to face. It means that it is tough
know
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their feelings and states which are something obtained by observing emotions.
In addition
, the meeting
also
become
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a headache as the
managers
don’t know what employees are doing when holding a telephone meeting. It is of great significance to imply
a
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uniform
management
. To summarize, doing
jobs
at
home
has advantages
as well as
disadvantages. In my opinion, the disadvantages are more and can bring irrevocable influence to the
management
of the
company
.
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