Write a letter to one of your colleagues has recently been appointed as the new manager of the company In your letter you should Introduce yourself Congratulate him, her on promotion and ask for an Appointment to discuss the problems in your section
Dear sir
I am Roza Bahodirova who had functioned with you in the same company for two years. I am corresponding
this
letter you
for promoting your level. I know you always make an afford to be a manager. Change preposition
to you
Moreover
you intend to set up a new company. So that you achieved your goals. I assume you will be a palatable leader of the company. I am going to demand Add a comma
,Moreover
for
appointment Remove the preposition
apply
on
my section to Change preposition
in
discuss
. If you devote your time to me it will make more people Correct pronoun usage
thisdiscuss
satisfactory
. I'm not very good at calculating all accounts. Replace the word
satisfied
Therefore
you are really
vital person for me to comment on about Add an article
the really
a really
appointment
. I hope you will contribute to my requests and will visit my house. Thank you for your attention.
Yours Faithfully.
Roza BahodirovaCorrect article usage
the appointment
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.