You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor, explain your position, apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day, ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter with regard to the meeting for which I was invited to an institute.

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, as per my current ,

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my financial condition is not stable that's why I am giving numerous interviews at different colleges.

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, I have another

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at the

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given by you. Hope you can understand my position.

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, I would like to apologise because I cannot come to the

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at the

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given by you. It is my humble request that I can come for a personal conference on another day or on the same day, which you called me upon but at a different

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. I want to ask you for a few more details about the

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that for how much

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the

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would go on. Apart from that, are there any tests that will be taken among all the people who have come for the personal

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? Looking forward to a positive and prompt response. Thank you. Yours sincerely, Shah Harshil

harshil31099Mon Dec 12 2022

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