Some people believe that it is essential to include Physical Education classes in the curriculum children, others think that for all school age children's time is better spent on more academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion,

Many people think that physical education should be included in the

school

curriculum.

However

, others consider

children

should be taught more academic

subjects

. In my opinion, there is a need for schools to teach physical education

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young people. It can be seen that physical

activites

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activities

are completely essential to

chidren's

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children's

development because they are at ages when their bodies start to change. While young students participate in physical lessons, it helps

develope

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develop

their bones and

flexibility

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the flexibility

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of their bodies.

For instance

, when they are in swimming classes and practise it regularly, they will have chances to improve their

heights

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height

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.

Moreover

, basketball, football and other outdoor sports make them more active and energetic, which is absolutely helpful for

children

's

study

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studies

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. It means they feel more comfortable and

study

better. Physical

subjects

ought to be included in

school

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the school

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curriculum because it is a part of comprehensive education.

School

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Schools

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teach not only academic

subjects

but

also

physical ones. Without physical

activies

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activities

activity

,

children

are getting more passive, which maybe influence their

study

performance.

Furthermore

, if

school

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the school

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does not have physical

subjects

in their curriculum, PE teachers can lose their jobs and

this

increases

unemployment

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the unemployment

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rate. Many parents focus more on their

children

's academic results and they think that their

chidren

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children

do not need to

study

physical

subjects

but their thoughts do more harm than good. Their

children

will lack

of

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physical conditions and their mental health is affected.

Therefore

, students' results do not satisfy their parents. In conclusion, young

chidren

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children

should have opportunities to

study

physical

subjects

at

school

because of the

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reasons. Government and society need to take more actions to promote and raise people's awareness of physical development.