Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

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beneficially impact human life in many aspects. Standing

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side; there is a controversial issue that their cruel contents have

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brought detrimental influences on society, whereas some justified that there is no correlation between these kinds of media and people’s actions. From my point of view, I believe that they have certainly affected the way humans act and interact in the community.

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, cruel movies and

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can both contribute to the development of aggressive thought patterns in people of any age. For young subjects who are vulnerable to violence due to their formation of personality is incomplete.

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, older people are still capable of mimicking violent behaviours contained in films and

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for the purpose of putting others in peril.

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, violent programs from many sources of media can lead to misperceptions.

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, there have been cruel spectacles in video

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which added illusionary elements result in changing them into becoming hilarious. In these contexts, some people, especially those who suffer from mental disorders, easily miscomprehend and commit crimes. In a nutshell, despite there a

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firmly support the standpoint that brutality contained in media and virtual

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can precipitate deviant behaviours in our community.

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ood use of their advantages as well as to have an appropriate attitude about their toxic contents, especially violent factors so as to achieve safety when utilizing them.