Some people think that history is important subject in education.other think that science and technology are more important .discuss both point of veiws and give your opinion.

A lot of parents nowadays prefer to have their children study
science
and
technology
rather than
history
. While both subjects are important in their own respect,
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think
science
and
technology
is
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more important than
history
as new innovations that make life easier for mankind are discovered via
technology
.
Firstly
, the study of
History
is of premium importance because
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history
, events that happened in a country decades ago are preserved and passed on from one generation to another.
For instance
, students in my Mother's
history
class get to learn
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the Nigerian civil war from their textbooks and explanations given by their
History
teacher.
Also
, through
History
, the culture of a particular tribe is preserved and passed on to the
next
generation.
Science
and
Technology
,
on the other
hand
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opens
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up the minds of individuals who study
it
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so that new inventions, especially those that make life easier for man are brought into existence. Take
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instance, a robot that separates weeds from crop plants
has
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just been invented in South Korea.
This
will bring so much ease to the Farmer as he will not have to pay extra for labour meant to weed his large farm. In Conclusion,
although
History
is important in teaching the younger generation
of
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events that have occurred in the past and
also
preserving our Culture, new inventions that will have
great
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impact on man are discovered through the
studyof
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study of
science
and
technology
.
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