One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think the cause are? What solution can you suggest?

Today, many urban areas
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with issue of
traffic
jams
. The basic reason is that having private
cars
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all
people
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the driving licence
test
and higher taxes for
cars
. Nowadays, too many
cars
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the
drive
on the roads. A myriad number of individuals have personal
cars
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of automobiles, but
this
process
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some
problem
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problems
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like
traffic
jams
.
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,
although
everyone
drive
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their own car
to
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everywhere not only to work but
also
universities
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because of their own preference, it is creating some
traffic
congestion in the
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megapolis
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can be
inconvenient
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the inconvenient
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solution for
people
who are in a hurry.
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, in the capital of Uzbekistan
people
who are driving
automobile
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facing with
traffic
jams
because of
increasing
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number of private
cars
of individuals on the road. The basic solution to avoid
from
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apply
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traffic
congestion is that
making
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challenges
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the challenges
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of driving licence
test
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tests
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and
increasing
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the payment of tax for
cars
. If government complicate the
test
of
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driving licence and it lead to reduce the number of
cars
on the road.
Moreover
,
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price of tax for
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an automobile
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automobile
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can be helpful to mitigate
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problem
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problems
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. For
this
reason , if
this
system works
then
much likely
less
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people
drive
cars
and we are able to handle
this
trouble.
For instance
, in
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Singapore
city
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only wealthy
people
manage to
drive
cars
as
result
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a result
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of higher taxes
of
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on
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cars
. To conclude, too many automobiles
causing
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cause
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traffic
jams
in the majority of metropolises, and
this
can
eliminated
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by imposing higher taxes and difficulting
the
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auto
test
exams.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic congestion
  • urban population
  • public transportation
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure
  • economic strength
  • consumerism
  • car ownership
  • commuting
  • peak hours
  • public transit
  • carpooling
  • ride-sharing
  • remote work
  • flexible working hours
  • cycling infrastructure
  • congestion charges
  • traffic management systems
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