One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestions

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• In our modern life transportation has been developing almost every day and nowadays one of the
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biggest issues faced by almost every large urban
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is traffic jams. The main reason for
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is that there are a number of private
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on the
roads
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these days and a viable solution is
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the
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tax should be increased. • The number of
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owning
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car
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increased day by day, with most families now having more than one
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, because nowadays, everyone tries to drive their private
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instead
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of public transport like buses or taxis it is one of the most easiest and time-saving ways
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because
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are so expensive that
people
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spend a lot of time on the road.
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, in Tashkent, the capital of Uzbekistan, the
roads
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are too narrow and there are too many
cars
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, which are the main reasons for traffic jams. • There are several solutions to these problems. the government should widen the
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in big cities and increase the
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tax. If I take Singapore as an example, only rich
people
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drive
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in Singapore and the
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are very expensive and the common
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can not
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buy them and
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the
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tax is very high and
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there is not much traffic. • In conclusion, having
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everything mentioned
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and I can come to
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conclusion that,
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cars
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are getting more and more
people
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are finding it difficult to reach their destination by public
cars
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when they want and to prevent
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the government should widen the
roads
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and increase all the
car
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charges.
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