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Some employers are giving more value on hiring people with good social skills apart from good qualifications. Do yiu agree or disagree that social skills are just as crucial as good qulification for success work?

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Nowadays, most companies recruit
people
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 which have better soft
skills
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 rather than education.some
people
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 think that social skill plays a vital role in future as compared to experience and qualification. I
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 point of view because today's technology has spread in the world, and it is equally important to education. My explanation is in the following paragraphs.
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 with, these days company managers more focuses on interpersonal
skills
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. Because, in
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 modern era,
people
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 are more socialized with internet platforms
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 as Facebook, Instagram, Twitter and other social apps. So, it is easy to convince individuals.
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, today, online business has increased, and it does not require any educational qualification only required communication
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.
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, some types of work only need soft
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 as marketing, management, and human resources (HR) all these types of jobs require good communication.
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, If
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 want to be successful in their work, they would have good education or experience as well as interpersonal
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. The director of the company should give equal value to qualifications and soft
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.
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, some technical workers like technicians, engineers and other types of professionals have
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 experience.
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, company directors appoint employees that depend on the role profession. In conclusion,
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 developed their educational qualifications in the same as they
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 developed communication or social
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 because in
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 technical era
people
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 know already the situation of the market. So, it is too hard to convince human beings.
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, I agree with the viewpoint to social
skills
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 are important as a good qualification for victory in work.
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