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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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In the modern world, many
companies
 often emphasize that their
items
 contain something new.
This
 is because
consumers
 opt for
products
 that have some developments.
Although
 small
companies
 are unable to produce these
items
 constantly, I believe that
this
 is a positive situation as it is beneficial to
consumers
 when choosing what to buy. To commence with, cooperations need to unveil new
products
 to meet
people
's demands.
Consumers
 are inclined to purchase kinds of stuff that are equipped with new features as they would like to show off purchased
items
 to others.
As a result
, many
companies
 have no choice but are required to advertise something new in their
products
 that can appeal to
consumers
. To illustrate, many
smartphones'
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smartphones
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companies
 put stress on novelty features on their smartphones
such
 as cameras or the quality of screens in advertising.
This
 tendency enables
people
 to select
items
 directly without contemplating. Nowadays, there are various kinds of
products
 for each,
however
, advertisements that emphasize new points can guide
people
 to buy cutting-edge ones.
Thus
, it is convenient for
people
 to refer to these kinds of advertisements in that
people
 can save time.
On the other hand
, small
companies
 that cannot generate something new in their
products
 because of the shortage of financial resources may be confronted with issues. If
companies
 cannot appeal
developments
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to developments
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 in their pieces of stuff,
consumers
 never buy them even though they are better than other
companies
' ones.
However
, I think that it is still possible for
such
companies
 to sell their
products
 without relying on publicities. To conclude, even though
this
 trend may be an acceptable situation for small
companies
 that are unable to develop financially new things, I think that
this
 is an excellent situation because
consumers
 can cut down the time that they spend on shopping.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emphasise
  • advertising
  • products
  • innovation
  • competitive strategy
  • consumer dissatisfaction
  • value
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