Do you think businesses should hire employees who will spend their entire lives working for the company? Explain why do you agree or disagree. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
It is clear that nowadays companies want to hire employees which will spend their all
life
working for the job
. While a number of people believe that this
is a good deal others argue that this
is like in the past century when people worked all their life
without job
satisfaction. I tend to disagree with the former argument because it is not fair to the common workers from the association
side.
Firstly
, there are not a plethora of employees who will agree to work
in association
for their entire life
. The reason for this
is if this
job
will monotonous people might get boring
, and Replace the word
bored
consequently
, they will not work
there. In addition
, these humans which will applying
Change the verb form
apply
be applying
in
Change preposition
to
this
corporation, they
even do not know what happen with their Correct pronoun usage
apply
company
for
Change preposition
at
this
time when they will Correct determiner usage
the
work
. For example
, we can hypothesize that this
company
found a person who want
to Change the verb form
wants
work
his entire life
, but he has a risk due to the fact that corporation
can be bankrupt or be bought by another Correct article usage
the corporation
company
in both situations he can lose job
, so Correct pronoun usage
his job
this
is disadvantage
for Add an article
a disadvantage
worker
.
Add an article
the worker
a worker
On the other hand
, this
is Add an article
a disadvantage
disadvantage
for some corporations too. Replace the word
disadvantageous
This
is because not every association
need that their employees worked entire life
there. For instance
, association
should spend their financial budget for creating Add an article
the association
good
Add an article
the good
a good
condition
for Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
Add an article
the worker
a worker
worker
, so Fix the agreement mistake
workers
this
person
feel better Fix the agreement mistake
people
on
Change preposition
in
his
workplace and Correct pronoun usage
their
this
Correct determiner usage
the
company
must calculate if this
employee will profitable
or not.
In conclusion, while there are numerous disadvantages to Add a missing verb
be profitable
have
Wrong verb form
having
worker
Correct article usage
a worker
which
will Correct pronoun usage
who
work
his all entire life
from both sides others think that his
is Change the pronoun
he
good
opportunity. Personally. I think that Add an article
a good
this
is bad
idea to have Change the article
a bad
this
kind of worker
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