One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think are the cauces of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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every large city is traffic congestion, resulting in a massive loss of time, effort,

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the quality of life and the mental health of the people living in these cities,

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jams victims,

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it takes me four hours just to drive for a distance

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more than 25 km, just due to the congestion, which I believe is a

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. In my essay, I'll be discussing the causes and the possible solutions that can put an end to traffic jams. From my

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, and depending on root causes analysis, the main cause for

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in the development made by governments through investing huge amounts of money in

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city

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number of cities which are probably already a big

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and have the basic infra

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, and excludes smaller suburban ones from the innovation plan,

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creating jobs and making the chosen province more

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than the other less lucky

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will find themselves forced to relocate to places where they will find clean water, utilities, jobs, schools, hospitals and all means of decent living. The chain reaction doesn't

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roads are blocked by thousands or even hundreds of thousands of cars. So, how to solve

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equality in funds distribution, all regions and provinces shall have a fair share of the budget,

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, providing an efficient public

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would be good to some extent.

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