Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Currently, some people believe that all
students
who
study
in
hight
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education
institution
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institutions
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should
study
only
students
prefer, while others convinced they should
study
those subjects, which will be profitable in
prospective
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;
in addition
, which will be related to
science
or
technology
. In my perspective,
students
should
study
whatever they prefer.
This
essay will discuss
about
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both sides. On the one hand , studying only subjects
which
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related
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are related
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to
science
and
technology
would be useful for scientific work and technological development.
However
,
on the other hand
, it may provide to adverse
tendency
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. It
meanse
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means
,the more world might have professionals in
science
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the science
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and
technology
field ,the less humanity would have specialists in other areas.
For example
, the government of Kazakhstan have been increasing
amount
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of scholarships in medicine, education,
mining
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and mining
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sphere;
hence
, Kazakhstan does not have enough IT specialists, who are essential for the contemporary world . Regard to people who think that university
students
should
study
whatever they want. I
am personally tend
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to believe
that is
the most suitable
desicion
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decision
design
because each student may
lern
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learn
according to themselves. Due
to
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, humanity may reach a gold balance
on
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developing every profession . In conclusion, studying what
students
prefer is the right way. If governments
establishe
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established
establish
subjects related to
science
and
technology
, it may bring to decline
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in others
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others profession
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other professions
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and
it's
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their
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quantity.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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