Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days, several parties believe that
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companies
have a big responsibility to support eco-friendly production by reducing the usage of commodity
packagings
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packaging
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.
Nevertheless
, others think that customers should limit purchasing
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products
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which
are not apply
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does not apply
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the
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enviromentally
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environmental
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regulations for their production.
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of
views
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and have a greater tendency
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toward
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the former opinion. On the one hand, production and retail
companies
should have
responsibility
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to manage their
product
well because all of the
products
will be sold to the customer,
therefore
the
companies
should care about whether the
product
would be
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environmentally
friendly or not. If the manufacturers have wrapped all of the
goods
with eco-friendly packaging, the
companies
can distribute the
products
to all
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hands
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. After which, the customer can easily buy the
product
since they are now worth
to buy
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.
For instance
, Cotton Candy which is produced by Silver Company presently changes the candy's packaging from
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plastic to
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paper which is
more tidy
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and go green.
On the other hand
, as
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costumers
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customers
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, they have
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rights
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right
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to buy whatever they want.
In addition
, they should not limit their shopping just because the
goods
are packed
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numerous wrappings.
Furthermore
, nowadays, several
products
tend to be packed
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many plastics,
hence
it would be hard for society to
fulfill
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their needs if they only can buy certain
goods
.
For example
, someone
want
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to buy milk for her baby,
however
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the packaging is not
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environmental
environmentally
safety
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.
As a result
, she still
buy
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it since she can not find the substitutional
product
in the supermarket. To conclude, managing their
product
well is the authority of each manufacturing company since they create a large scale of
goods
to be sold to
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,
thus
the
products
should
be comply
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with the terms and conditions that apply.
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,
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consumers can spend their money
to
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several
goods
unconditionally.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Eco-friendly
  • Carbon footprint
  • Excessive packaging
  • Biodegradable materials
  • Corporate social responsibility
  • Consumer advocacy
  • Environmental stewardship
  • Waste reduction
  • Recycling initiatives
  • Green practices
  • Minimalist lifestyle
  • Resource conservation
  • Sustainable consumption
  • Packaging alternatives
  • Regulatory measures
  • Ethical choices
  • Environmental impact assessment
  • Renewable resources
  • Compostable packaging
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