Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
These days, several parties believe that
the
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apply
companies
have a big responsibility to support eco-friendly production by reducing the usage of commodity packagings
. Fix the agreement mistake
packaging
Nevertheless
, others think that customers should limit purchasing product
which Fix the agreement mistake
products
are not apply
Change the verb form
does not apply
the
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apply
enviromentally
regulations for their production. Correct your spelling
environmental
environmentally
This
essay will deliberate both point
of Change to a plural noun
points
views
and have a greater tendency Fix the agreement mistake
view
on
the former opinion.
On the one hand, production and retail Change preposition
toward
companies
should have responsibility
to manage their Add an article
a responsibility
the responsibility
product
well because all of the products
will be sold to the customer, therefore
the companies
should care about whether the product
would be enviromentally
friendly or not. If the manufacturers have wrapped all of the Correct your spelling
environmentally
goods
with eco-friendly packaging, the companies
can distribute the products
to all of
Change preposition
apply
hands
. After which, the customer can easily buy the Add an article
the hands
product
since they are now worth to buy
. Change the verb form
buying
For instance
, Cotton Candy which is produced by Silver Company presently changes the candy's packaging from the
plastic to Correct article usage
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the
paper which is Correct article usage
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more tidy
and go green.
Replace the words
tidier
On the other hand
, as the
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costumers
, they have Correct your spelling
customers
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the rights
rights
to buy whatever they want. Fix the agreement mistake
right
In addition
, they should not limit their shopping just because the goods
are packed by
numerous wrappings. Change preposition
with
Furthermore
, nowadays, several products
tend to be packed by
many plastics, Change preposition
with
hence
it would be hard for society to fulfill
their needs if they only can buy certain Change the spelling
fulfil
goods
. For example
, someone want
to buy milk for her baby, Change the verb form
wants
however
the packaging is not Add a comma
,however
enviromentally
Correct your spelling
environmental
environmentally
safety
. Replace the word
safe
As a result
, she still buy
it since she can not find the substitutional Change the verb form
buys
product
in the supermarket.
To conclude, managing their product
well is the authority of each manufacturing company since they create a large scale of goods
to be sold to another parties
, Replace the adjective
another party
other parties
thus
the products
should be comply
with the terms and conditions that apply. Change the verb form
comply
Thus
, the
consumers can spend their money Correct article usage
apply
to
several Change preposition
on
goods
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