Some people think the government should be responsible for solving the pollution problems which result from heavy traffic. To what extent do you agree?

It is commonly argued that

pollution

brought about by

traffic

congestion

should be solved by the

government

. I strongly agree with

this

viewpoint, since I believe the

government

has a stronghold on the plans and policies that it creates to eliminate or perhaps lessen the effects of

traffic

congestion

that is

now evident in the

pollution

problems that the world is suffering.

Firstly

,

traffic

congestion

is a result of inadequate road infrastructure. The

government

should have invested and sourced

out

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funds to build more roads to ease

traffic

congestion

.

For example

, city roads should be widened and allow more access to business centres, schools and health institutions.

Secondly

,

the

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land transportation agencies should be more strict in the issuance of car licensing permits. In

this

way, the number of cars would lessen,

thus

thereby reducing the

traffic

jams. It is clear that

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car owners

also

have the responsibility of making sure that their vehicles are in top fit condition. Complying with the clean air act policy of the

government

should be their top priority.

For instance

, if all cars are in compliance with the policies mandated by

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authorized agencies, it could lead to the reduction of air

pollution

brought about by the smoke generated by their vehicles. In conclusion, it is the responsibility of the

government

to take action in order to reduce the effects of

pollution

brought about by heavy

traffic

. In my opinion, efforts made by an individual

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not enough to combat

pollution

problems, but mainly the

government

should spearhead

this

problem.