Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both and give your opinion.

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Nowadays human activity causes damage to our

nature

. Growth of population, industrial development, manufacturing and other aspects affect our plants and animals around the world. The problem is complex and it's not easy to find a way

how

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to compensate for

this

damage, but it doesn'

mean we shouldn'

search for a possible solution. A rapid expansion of factories, energy stations, and pollution of our air is a consequence of constantly growing humanity's needs. Some countries have limited resources, and the environmental problem is significant,

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other countries don'

care about the negative impact on our

nature

because of economic situation or a huge amount of territories. Unfortunately, the

overall

interest in providing safety for our ecological situation is very low. That's why it's more likely that we will not see a rapid change

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our environment. It's not true that people cannot make our environment better. There are many successful projects

of reducing

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damage to our

nature

. One of them, electric cars, is sharply decreasing air pollution on whole continents.

For example

, Norway's government decided to remove all taxes and reduce income taxes for electric car owners. The consequence of

this

strategy caused the cleanest air in Europe and now more than 75% of cars don'

use gas. The other example is Sweden's garbage recycling factories, which caused a full overcome of all rubbish around the country. Summing up, it's extremely difficult to make a rapid change in our environment, but every project, rather is big or small, can sharply improve our

nature

's safety.

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Summary
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Prediction or recommendation

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In conclusion
To conclude
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Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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negative impact
extinct
deforestation
pollution
habitat destruction
mitigate
reverse
stricter regulations
protected areas
endangered species
education and awareness campaigns
biodiversity
consequences
renewable energy sources
organic farming
eco-tourism
environmental regulations
sustainable practices
natural ecosystems
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Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both and give your opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

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In many nations, it is becoming mandatory to receive vaccinations in order to prevent the spread of disease. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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