You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience, you have

#month #programme #uk #head #course #participants #events #organiser #interest #role #information

Dear Sir/Madam; I am writing

this

letter to express my interest in the social

events

’ organiser role which has been imposed for

month's training programme. I will be joining for a month training programme in the UK

month and I am keen to participate as an event organiser if I can get a chance for that role.

First

and foremost, I would like you to furnish me with detailed information about group sizes and special job responsibilities that I need to do for the group.

Moreover

, if you are looking for someone who has a certification in Leisure and

events

, I graduated with leisure and

events

management and I organised different sporting and recreational

events

for the school during my college studies. Due to having some experience in organising

events

, I believe that I am able to manage

this

role. Thank you in advance. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Faithfully, Sandar

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

158 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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