You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience, you have

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Dear Sir/Madam; I am writing
this
letter to express my interest in the social
events
’ organiser role which has been imposed for
next
month's training programme. I will be joining for a month training programme in the UK
next
month and I am keen to participate as an event organiser if I can get a chance for that role.
First
and foremost, I would like you to furnish me with detailed information about group sizes and special job responsibilities that I need to do for the group.
Moreover
, if you are looking for someone who has a certification in Leisure and
events
, I graduated with leisure and
events
management and I organised different sporting and recreational
events
for the school during my college studies. Due to having some experience in organising
events
, I believe that I am able to manage
this
role. Thank you in advance. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Faithfully, Sandar
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