Please explain about your non-academic activities planning for the next 4 months!

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4 months, I will have been working on preparing for the IELTS by self-studying because I have a target to get English certification in the middle of 2023. It

also

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can be earlier since I want to try to apply for IISMA. I'm quite positive about my English capability because ,from the estimates and predictions that I got, the result made me optimistic to get the real test.

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, there are still a lot of improvements. Based on the prediction result, I will start focusing more on writing rather than speaking because the prediction

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is below 6,

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meanwhile

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I got 7 for my speaking.

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, I have some resources that can help me to improve my writing. So, I could say that I’m getting on track toward my goal of getting an 8 for the IELTS band

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. It is an unexceptional

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but I believe in myself that I can reach that

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or even more

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Dec 22, 2022

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

161 words

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Please explain about your non-academic activities planning for the next 4 months!

Include an introduction and conclusion

Write a letter to the Manager to complain about the problems that you met on the flight recently. In your letter you should: - 1. give details of flight 2. What were the issues with the flight. 3. What you want the manager to do about it.

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time what are the causes of this continue rise? what would be the measures to address the greatest problem faced by humanity?

Your next door neighbour own a small dog that bark throughout day and night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Your reason for writing. What you would like to happen. A nice respectful style.

Many elderly people are no long looked after by their families but put are in nurse homes or care homes. What are the advantages or disadvantages of this trend?