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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #history #school #subjects #today’s #world #science #technology
It’s true that we are living in a world where
technology
 and social media
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 these two opinions:
History
 is one of the most important
school
subjects
 and
subjects
 like Science and
Technology
 are more important than
History
. The following paragraphs will discuss both these views. On the one hand, many people believe
History
 is very essential for
school
subjects
. It’s quite true because we have learned a lot of lessons thanks to
History
.
In addition
, learning
this
 subject can develop one person’s patriotism to fully contribute to the country where she is living.
However
,
History
 in
school
 is more boring than
History
 which we are learning ourselves by reading books or watching videos. Depending on our teacher’s ability to empathize, a lesson in
school
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this
 subject can be interesting and we can gain knowledge from our
forefathers’s
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story
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.
On the other hand
, some people assume that
subjects
 like Science and
Technology
 are more important than
History
.
This
 opinion is fairly not right. It is important for us to learn those
subjects
 because we can learn about critical thinking and system thinking which can improve our
problem solving
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 skills. Science and
Technology
 have their own strengths but it doesn’t mean that they are more vital than
History
. Overall, the importance depends on how people perceive those
subjects
. If you are in an academic environment, you want to gain more knowledge, both are equally significant.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • Historical perspective
  • Analytical skills
  • Contextual understanding
  • Technological advancements
  • STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, Mathematics)
  • Innovation
  • Interdisciplinary
  • Job market
  • Climate crisis
  • Cultural identity
  • Critical thinking
  • Humanities
  • Contemporary issues
  • Integration
  • Tech-savvy
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